AfriGeneas Writers Forum
Re: Short Poem needs Critique
In Response To: Short Poem needs Critique ()
I really enjoyed your poem, I confess, upon a second read.
I have difficulty staying with poems that longer than haikus.
Having said all that, I went back to your poem to give it a second shot.
That's where friends come in. Those that would listen and offer insights ("Honey Hush"), invariably, became our best friends.
Thank you for providing a look back at how we thought, felt, and interpret the world when we were young. I'm glad for that second read.