AfriGeneas Writers Forum
In Response To: Re: Pearle ()
Yes, my mother was tall (5'10) and that's where I get my height (6'1).
You're probably right. I was trying to tell too many stories in such a short space. The connections were in my head - and not translated on the page. Hmmn... I think I can tighten it up. Stay tuned.
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